November 19: Hidden Treasure

/

NOVEMBER PLAYWRITING CHALLENGE

November 19: HIDDEN TREASURE

PROMPT Snark: THE IDEA OF FINDING SOMETHING

SCENE

(The setting is a nursing home inside the room of one of the residents. It is CLAIRE’s room and MARGE, her friend, is there too.)

MARGE

I just sometimes think they’re trying to kill us. 

CLAIRE

They’re not trying to kill us.

MARGE

Then how do you explain it?

CLAIRE

I don’t know…incompetent chefs. Low quality ingredients? Marge if the fine administrators of this nursing home were truly trying to poison us, there would be more overall death.

MARGE

That’s true. I’ve been waiting to take Sue Summers’ corner room for 5 years now and SHE WILL NOT DIE. Maybe I should poison her?

CLAIRE

Ok, I think we’ve deviated from fun banter to conspiracy to commit murder.

MARGE

Well then….fine. What else do you want to talk about. 

CLAIRE

(struggling)

Oh…I guess maybe.

MARGE

Ya got nothing toots, bet you it makes my suspicions look pretty good now. 

CLAIRE

Maybe we should join the book club.

MARGE

Have you seen them lately, they’re a bunch of people who joined from he dementia wing. They’ve read the same book for the last 6 months.

CLAIRE

We can make our own book club!

MARGE

I feel like that’s going to turn raunchy very quickly. 

CLAIRE

I have no idea what you mean. Toni was the raunchy one.

MARGE

God I miss her.

CLAIRE

I do too. She just had a way of giving this sad end of life existence some meaning. 

MARGE

Some fun!

CLAIRE

God did we have fun. Planning pranks, going to dances, flirting with guys.

MARGE

And girls!

CLAIRE

She just gave our lives meaning.

MARGE

We need to find our own meeting.

CLAIRE

I just wish she could offer a little help from the great beyond. If anyone would be a superior ghost it would be here.

MARGE

I’ve never heard a ghost scream singing Tom Jones at 2am like she did so I would welcome that. 

CLAIRE

God she loved Tom Jones.

MARGE

Don’t you have her records?

CLAIRE

I do! Should we listen to some Tom Jones in her honor?

MARGE

Well it would pass the time.

(Claire goes over to her record player and finds the Tom Jones Record. It’s Not Unusual starts playing.)

MARGE

(singing)

It’s not unusual… Etc.

CLAIRE

Marge…I never noticed…what is this?

MARGE

Don’t interrupt me in the middle of a performance.

CLAIRE

(turning record off)

Be serious…It looks like a code? One of those what are they called QR codes?

MARGE

Like those things people make you scan instead of a menu at restaurants. Or give you instead of an actual playbill, which is ridiculous?

CLAIRE

No one will forget that day. You got us banned from the local high school auditorium. That production of Fiddler on the Roof Jr never saw us coming. Do you have your cell phone on you?

MARGE

I keep my cell phone in the freezer so I can’t get to it and use all my minutes.

CLAIRE

First of all, that’s credit cards you’re supposed to do that to not cell phones. Second of all that is not good for a cell phone! Nonetheless, let me get mine.

(She takes out her cell phone and scans the code on the record cover. A voice emerges)

TONI

Hi kittens!

MARGE

Oh my God

CLAIRE

Is that who I think it is?

TONI

If you’re listening to this I’m dead. Or you stole my Tom Jones record, in which case you’ll be dead soon. But most likely I’m dead. Which is a bummer, but at least I’m on my way to answer my eternal question: Are there bars in heaven? But I didn’t want you to get bored without me and have you do something lame like start a book club.

MARGE

How did she know!

TONI

So I’ve hidden something very valuable and it’s up to you to find it. Gotta keep it spicy right? Your first clue is. “If you go to sleep here you’re either Italian or Diane Keaton in The Godfather” Have fun kittens!

CLAIRE

Why would she do this?

MARGE

She really thought of everything. But what does it mean?

CLAIRE

The fish tank! The large fish tank in the lobby sleeping with the fishes! Lets go!

TO BE CONTINUED 


Discover more from Vintage Old Biddy

Subscribe to get the latest posts sent to your email.


Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

I would describe my style and attitude as…

A cross between Iris Apfel, Miriam Margoles, Lucille Ball. But I am a devoted maximalist through and through. Although, as another inspiration once said

Style—all who have it share one thing: originality.

Diana Vreeland

Most Recent Blog Posts